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Re: [dane] Second WGLC draft-ietf-dane-smime

Edward Lewis <edward.lewis@icann.org> Tue, 15 November 2016 22:16 UTC

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From: Edward Lewis <edward.lewis@icann.org>
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On 11/14/16, 14:47, "Olafur Gudmundsson" wrote:

>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dane-smime-12[tools.ietf.org]

I've read the document and think it adequately covers the experiment.

I have one request, which is not a show stopper.  The term "rainbow table" ought to have a reference to a definition of the term.  (Or as is done for zone walking, a brief definition in-line.)  This is to stem the introduction of new terms without clear origins, which historically nags IETF documents.

(Even Wikipedia's entry for "rainbow table" has a note including a need for more precise citations. ;) )

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