Re: [Detnet] Transport sub-layer name change (Was Re: Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08)
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Transport sub-layer name change (Was Re: Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08)
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IPv6 *is* there ;-) On 12/13/2018 3:29 PM, Andrew G. Malis wrote: > Lou, > > Thanks, that's what I thought, but I didn't see it in your list of > DetNet Forwarding sub-layer protocols. > > Cheers. > Andy > > > On Thu, Dec 13, 2018 at 1:55 PM Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net > <mailto:lberger@labn.net>> wrote: > > Hi Andy, > > As SRv6 is implemented using an IPv6 routing header the figure below > accurately shows IPv6 (and consequently SRv6) as being part of the > Forwarding sub-layer. > > In case you were really asking if use of SRv6 is in scope of > DetNet WG, > I don't see anything in the charter that would preclude the WG > working > on DetNet SRv6. > > Lou > > On 12/13/2018 1:16 PM, Andrew G. Malis wrote: > > Lou, > > > > I think we've discussed this before, but I wanted to confirm > whether > > SRv6 is in scope for the DetNet Forwarding sub-layer. > > > > Thanks, > > Andy > > > > > > On Thu, Dec 13, 2018 at 12:47 PM Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net > <mailto:lberger@labn.net> > > <mailto:lberger@labn.net <mailto:lberger@labn.net>>> wrote: > > > > Hi, > > > > My reading is that the WG has settled on: > > > > +----------------------------+ > > | DetNet Service sub-layer | PW, UDP, GRE > > +----------------------------+ > > | DetNet Forwarding sub-layer| IPv6, IPv4, MPLS TE LSPs, > > MPLS SR > > +----------------------------+ > > . > > . > > > > Figure 4: DetNet adaptation to data plane > > > > Authors, (of detnet-architecture) > > Please work to have the next rev of the draft reflect this > > change. > > > > Thank you to all who participated in the discussion! > > Lou > > (as co-chair and doc shepherd) > > > > On 11/20/2018 1:18 PM, Lou Berger wrote: > > > ALL, > > > > > > There is a desire to replace the word "Transport" from the > DetNet > > > Transport sub-layer to avoid confusion with L$ Transport > protocols. > > > > > > In the TEAS WG we had a similar discussion and we replaced > > "Transport" > > > with "Traffic Engineered (TE) ". > > > > > > While a bit more verbose, what do people think about this > change? > > > > > > To be clear, the suggestion is: > > > > > > OLD > > > > > > . > > > . > > > +----------------------------+ > > > | DetNet Service sub-layer | PW, UDP, GRE > > > +----------------------------+ > > > | DetNet Transport sub-layer | IPv6, IPv4, MPLS TE > LSPs, > > MPLS SR > > > +----------------------------+ > > > . > > > . > > > > > > Figure 4: DetNet adaptation to data plane > > > > > > NEW > > > > > > . > > > . > > > +----------------------------+ > > > | DetNet Service sub-layer | PW, UDP, GRE > > > +----------------------------+ > > > | DetNet TE sub-layer | IPv6, IPv4, MPLS TE > LSPs, > > MPLS SR > > > +----------------------------+ > > > . > > > . > > > > > > Figure 4: DetNet adaptation to data plane > > > > > > Lou > > > > > > On 11/20/2018 11:21 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) wrote: > > >> Hello Lou: > > >> > > >> > > >> About ' discuss changing the name of the "DetNet Transport > > sub-layer" to avoid the word "transport". ' > > >> > > >> For one I'd like to make that call. The unfortunate name > > collision has started to hurt us quite a bit already and people > > are getting confused on very active exchanges we have on the > > mailing list. > > >> > > >> I tend to agree that for the general IETF "transport" > generally > > means "L4". Even point one in your email uses "transport" > that way > > I guess. Sadly many alternate names are highly overloaded > already > > (think "carrier" for instance, or "bus"). I like the term > "train" > > because of the association with a schedule, but that's just me. > > >> > > >> Same goes actually for the complex path that we build. That > > complex path can be an elongated DODAG with multiple PREOF > points. > > Usual terms like "circuit" or "path" fail to capture that > > complexity. 6TiSCH found the term "Track" to refer to it. > > >> > > >> Would you push that discussion to the ML? > > >> > > >> Take care, > > >> > > >> Pascal > > >> > > >>> -----Original Message----- > > >>> From: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net > <mailto:lberger@labn.net> <mailto:lberger@labn.net > <mailto:lberger@labn.net>>> > > >>> Sent: mardi 20 novembre 2018 13:11 > > >>> To: Scharf, Michael <Michael.Scharf@hs-esslingen.de > <mailto:Michael.Scharf@hs-esslingen.de> > > <mailto:Michael.Scharf@hs-esslingen.de > <mailto:Michael.Scharf@hs-esslingen.de>>> > > >>> Cc: tsv-art@ietf.org <mailto:tsv-art@ietf.org> > <mailto:tsv-art@ietf.org <mailto:tsv-art@ietf.org>>; > > detnet@ietf.org <mailto:detnet@ietf.org> <mailto:detnet@ietf.org > <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>>; draft-ietf-detnet- > > >>> architecture.all@ietf.org > <mailto:architecture.all@ietf.org> > <mailto:architecture.all@ietf.org <mailto:architecture.all@ietf.org>> > > >>> Subject: Re: [Detnet] Tsvart last call review of > > draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08 > > >>> > > >>> Michael, > > >>> > > >>> I think we're getting somewhere and identifying where we > have > > disconnects > > >>> and what may (and what may not) need to change in the > > document. My > > >>> takeaways are: > > >>> > > >>> - The document needs a good 'scrub' of the congestion > related > > references to > > >>> ensure that the document only makes statements on what is > > actually done > > >>> within a DetNet and the relationship with transport > protocols > > that use detnet > > >>> (which are in fact outside the scope of the DetNet WG). > I'll > > work with the > > >>> authors and WG on this -- I see this change as > important, but > > editorial in > > >>> nature. > > >>> > > >>> - We have a perception issue with at least one member of the > > TSV area on the > > >>> meaning and more importantly, implication, of the term > "DetNet > > >>> *Transport* sub-layer". While I don't disagree that a good > > portion of the IETF > > >>> thinks transport protocol (UDP/TCP) when they hear > "transport" > > >>> there are plenty others, particularly in the routing > area, who > > understand that > > >>> "transport" can refer to Transport Networks. And Transport > > Network is a well > > >>> understood general industry term. The IETF even has a > bunch of > > RFCs that > > >>> relate to Transport networks. This said, I think it > > reasonable to go back to the > > >>> DetNet WG and discuss changing the name of the "DetNet > > Transport sub- > > >>> layer" to avoid the word "transport". -- BTW we made a > > parallel change in > > >>> the TEAS WG when producing RFC8453. > > >>> > > >>> See below for detail response in-line. > > >>> > > >>> On 11/19/2018 5:15 PM, Scharf, Michael wrote: > > >>>> Lou, > > >>>> > > >>>>> -- > > >>>>> I wanted to take a step back from the multiple discussions > > that were > > >>>>> spawned by your review -- from a doc shepherd perspective, > > and see > > >>>>> where we are. I know that the authors have sent a -09 > > version that > > >>>>> addresses some, but not all issues. > > >>>>> > > >>>>> From the exchanges I've seen, I think the key > remaining > > issues are > > >>>>> related to: > > >>>>> > > >>>>> (a) possibly introduction of congestion in the general > > internet if > > >>>>> packets were somehow to escape a detnet domain. The > source > > of this > > >>>>> congestion would be inelastic traffic using DetNet or > due to > > >>>>> congestion loss that is masked by PREOF. > > >>>> These are two major issues that need to be addressed. Note > > that it may not > > >>> be sufficient just to add a section on operational and > deployment > > >>> considerations. Also the existing text in the document will > > need to get aligned > > >>> to normative guidance on how to avoid a congestion collapse. > > >>>> In -09, one example would be Section 3.1. "Primary goals > > defining the > > >>> DetNet QoS" > > >>>> Congestion protection operates by allocating > resources > > along the path > > >>>> of a DetNet flow, e.g., buffer space or link > > bandwidth. Congestion > > >>>> protection greatly reduces, or even eliminates > > entirely, packet loss > > >>>> due to output packet congestion within the > network, but > > it can only > > >>>> be supplied to a DetNet flow that is limited at the > > source to a > > >>>> maximum packet size and transmission rate. Note that > > congestion > > >>>> protection provided via congestion detection and > > notification is > > >>>> explicitly excluded from consideration in DetNet, > as it > > serves a > > >>>> different set of applications. > > >>>> At least the last sentence would contradict a better > > discussion of congestion > > >>> in the document. For instance, it could just be removed. In > > any case, the > > >>> current wording in the last sentence is not correct, as the > > IETF term for what is > > >>> described in the last sentence is "congestion control". > > >>>> Another example would be Section 3.2.1.1. "Eliminate > > congestion loss" > > >>>> > > >>>> The primary means by which DetNet achieves its QoS > > assurances is to > > >>>> reduce, or even completely eliminate, congestion > within > > a DetNet node > > >>>> as a cause of packet loss. This can be achieved only > > by the > > >>>> provision of sufficient buffer storage at each node > > through the > > >>>> network to ensure that no packets are dropped due > to a > > lack of buffer > > >>>> storage. Note that a DetNet flow cannot be > throttled, > > i.e., its > > >>>> transmission rate cannot be reduced via explicit > congestion > > >>>> notification. > > >>>> > > >>>> This section IMHO has to include a discussion of what > happens > > in the (not > > >>> expected) case that packets get dropped or that ECN > marks are > > received. It is > > >>> understood that this would not happen in normal > operation of a > > DetNet > > >>> network, but I believe just considering the error-free > > operation of a DetNet > > >>> network is not sufficient for this document. At least > for the > > risk of traffic that > > >>> may escape from a DetNet network is inherently not > sufficient > > to assume that > > >>> the DetNet network is always error-free. > > >>> > > >>> I think these are examples of text that needs to be > cleanup up > > and to > > >>> delineate what is done with a DetNet. > > >>> > > >>> > > >>>> As a result, addressing my concerns will most likely > require > > editing several > > >>> parts of the document. > > >>>> In addition, I'd like to emphasize that my review > comment "It > > is surprising > > >>> that there is hardly any discussion on network > robustness and > > safety" > > >>> > > >>> I have no idea what you mean by safety here. Can you > elaborate. > > >>> > > >>> > > >>>> covers more than just inelastic traffic that escapes from a > > DetNet network > > >>> and masking of packet loss. Given that DetNet traffic may be > > extremely critical > > >>> traffic, I really wonder why the document doesn't emphasize > > more the > > >>> required robustness against failures *inside* the DetNet > > network as well as > > >>> counter-measures. But this is something the WG needs to > > decide. As TSV-ART > > >>> reviewer, I will be fine if the document clearly > describes how > > the impact of > > >>> failures will be isolated inside the DetNet network and will > > not put the general > > >>> Internet at risk. > > >>> > > >>> I agree - I think, the document should be clear on it's > scope and > > >>> relationship to general internet usage. > > >>> > > >>> > > >>>>> (b) The use of the term 'transport' in DetNet to refer to > > what is > > >>>>> basically a Traffic Engineered sub-network layer, such > as is > > provided > > >>>>> with MPLS-TE or Optical Transport Networks. > > >>>> In the Internet architecture, the term 'transport' > refers to > > Internet transport > > >>> protocols. I doubt that the document can avoid > discussing the > > implications of > > >>> and interactions with Internet transport protocols such > as UDP > > or TCP. As a > > >>> result, I disagree that the document can use the term > > 'transport' to refer to > > >>> traffic engineered sub-network layers. > > >>> > > >>> I think this is covered by my comment above. > > >>> > > >>> > > >>>> From a TSV-ART point of view, the document can > either only > > use the term > > >>> "transport" for Internet transport protocols and use another > > term for sub- > > >>> network layers (as handled in the *routing* area of the > IETF), > > or the document > > >>> has to clearly distinguish between the Internet transport > > layer and other uses > > >>> of the term "transport" and explain the overlap. I > believe the > > former would be > > >>> less confusing, but I will leave it up to the TSV ADs to > > discuss terminology > > >>> overlap in the IESG. As TSV-ART reviewer I insist that the > > document uses the > > >>> terms "transport layer" and "transport protocol" only when > > referring to the > > >>> Internet transport layer. > > >>> > > >>> I'm personally okay with a name change and even willing to > > push this > > >>> discussion within the WG, but as said above, "Transport > > Network" is a > > >>> generally understood industry term that is also used in RFCs > > -- so we'll > > >>> have to see what where WG consensus ends up. > > >>> > > >>>>> Do you have any other issues that that are critical to be > > addressed > > >>>>> before this work moves forward? If so which? > > >>>> Regarding Section 4.4 I have already deferred the > discussion > > to the IESG. The > > >>> TSV-ART review comment is that the IESG needs to carefully > > look at the > > >>> concepts, terminology, and references in section 4.4. > > >>>> Regarding my other comments, I acknowledge that -09 is > a step > > forward. But > > >>> given the cross-dependencies e.g. regarding terminology and > > definitions, I will > > >>> need to read the text completely once there is a > proposal how > > to address my > > >>> review. As noted in my review, I believe the document > must use > > terminology > > >>> clearly and consistently. As example, a statement in -09 > such > > as "Network > > >>> nodes supporting DetNet flows have to implement some of > the DetNet > > >>> capabilities (not necessarily all) in order to treat DetNet > > flows such that their > > >>> QoS requirements are met" is IMHO too vague. But in such > cases > > it depends > > >>> whether there is precise normative guidance elsewhere. And > > this requires > > >>> looking at the text as a whole. > > >>> > > >>> I think the next steps lie with me and the WG. We'll let you > > know once > > >>> there is a new version. Of course, you can also > contribute to > > the WG > > >>> discussion on the topic. > > >>> > > >>> Thanks, > > >>> > > >>> Lou > > >>> > > >>>> Best regards > > >>>> > > >>>> Michael > > >>>> > > >>>> > > >>>> > > >>>>> Thank you, > > >>>>> > > >>>>> Lou > > >>>>> > > >>>>> On 9/28/2018 6:24 PM, Michael Scharf wrote: > > >>>>>> Reviewer: Michael Scharf > > >>>>>> Review result: Ready with Issues > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> The document "Deterministic Networking Architecture" > > >>>>>> (draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08) defines an overall > > framework for > > >>>>>> Deterministic Networking. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> As TSV-ART reviewer, I believe that this document has > issues as > > >>>>> detailed below. > > >>>>>> Michael > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Major issues: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * It seems that DetNet cannot easily be deployed in the > > Internet > > >>>>> without > > >>>>>> additional means. Thus, for a baseline document, one > could > > expect > > >>>>> some > > >>>>>> explanation on the requirements of deploying DetNet in a > > network. > > >>>>> DetNet > > >>>>>> basically requires support in (almost) all network > devices > > >>>>> transporting DetNet > > >>>>>> traffic. That assumption should be explicitly spelt out > > early in the > > >>>>> document, > > >>>>>> e.g., in the introduction. There also needs to be an > explicit > > >>>>> discussion of the > > >>>>>> implications if not the whole network is aware of or > > supports DetNet. > > >>>>> There is > > >>>>>> some text in Section 4.2.2 and Section 4.3.3, but I > believe > > >>>>> additional explicit > > >>>>>> discussion is needed at a prominant place. For instance, > > can use of > > >>>>> DetNet do > > >>>>>> harm to parts of a network not supporting DetNet? As > a side > > note, > > >>>>> when TCPM > > >>>>>> published RFC 8257, the following disclaimer was added: > > "DCTCP, as > > >>>>> described in > > >>>>>> this specification, is applicable to deployments in > controlled > > >>>>> environments > > >>>>>> like data centers, but it must not be deployed over > the public > > >>>>> Internet without > > >>>>>> additional measures." I wonder if a similar disclaimer is > > needed for > > >>>>> DetNet. If > > >>>>>> there is an implicit assumption that DetNet will be > used in > > >>>>> homogenous > > >>>>>> environments with mostly DetNet-aware devices within > the same > > >>>>> organization, > > >>>>>> such an assumption should be made explicit. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * It is surprising that there is hardly any discussion on > > network > > >>>>> robustness > > >>>>>> and safety; this probably also relates to security. For > > instance, > > >>>>>> misconfiguration or errors of functions performing packet > > replication > > >>>>> could > > >>>>>> severely and permantly congest a network and cause harm. > > How does the > > >>>>> DetNet > > >>>>>> architecture ensure that a network stays fully > operational > > e.g. if > > >>>>> the topology > > >>>>>> changes or there are equipment failures? Probably > this can > > be solved > > >>>>> by > > >>>>>> implementations (e.g., dynamic control plane), but > why are > > >>>>> corresponding > > >>>>>> requirements not spelt out? Section 3.3.2 speculates that > > filters and > > >>>>> policers > > >>>>>> can help, and that may be true, but that probably > still assumes > > >>>>> consistently > > >>>>>> and correctly configured (and well-behaving) devices. And > > Section > > >>>>> 3.3.2 is > > >>>>>> vague and mentions a "infinite variety of possible > > failures" without > > >>>>> stating > > >>>>>> any requirements or recommendations. There may be further > > solutions, > > >>>>> such as > > >>>>>> circuit breakers and the like. Why are such topics not > > discussed? > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Somewhat related, the document only looks at impact of > > failures to > > >>>>> the QoS of > > >>>>>> DetNet traffic. What is missing is a discussion how to > > protect non- > > >>>>> DetNet parts > > >>>>>> of a network from any harm caused by DetNet mechanisms. > > Solutions to > > >>>>> this > > >>>>>> probably exist. But why is the impact on non-DetNet > traffic > > (e.g., in > > >>>>> case of > > >>>>>> topology changes or failures of DetNet functions) not > > discussed at > > >>>>> all in the > > >>>>>> document? > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Regarding security, an architecture like DetNet > probably > > requires > > >>>>> that only > > >>>>>> authenticated and authorized end systems have access > to the > > data > > >>>>> plane. The > > >>>>>> security considerations only briefly mention the control > > aspect ("the > > >>>>>> authentication and authorization of the controlling > systems"). > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * For an architecture document, the lack of clarity and > > consistency > > >>>>> regarding > > >>>>>> terminology is concerning. This specifically applies > to the > > case of > > >>>>> incomplete > > >>>>>> networks (as per Section 4.2.2 and 4.3.3) that > include "DetNet- > > >>>>> unaware nodes". > > >>>>>> The document introduces terms such as "DetNet > intermediate > > nodes" but > > >>>>> then > > >>>>>> repeatedly uses generic terms such as "node" or "hop" > that may > > >>>>> include > > >>>>>> DetNet-unaware nodes. For instance, for incomplete > networks, a > > >>>>> sentence such as > > >>>>>> "The primary means by which DetNet achieves its QoS > > assurances is to > > >>>>> reduce, or > > >>>>>> even completely eliminate, congestion within a node as a > > cause of > > >>>>> packet loss" > > >>>>>> seems to only apply to "DetNet transit nodes" but not > > "DetNet-unaware > > >>>>> nodes". > > >>>>>> Similar ambiguity exist for other use of the terms "hop" > > and "node", > > >>>>> which may > > >>>>>> or may not include DetNet-unaware nodes. It is > unclear why the > > >>>>> document does > > >>>>>> not consistently use the terminology introduced in > Section > > 2.1 in all > > >>>>> sections > > >>>>>> and clearly distinguishes cases with and without DetNet > > support. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Section 4.4 refers to RFC 7426, which is an > informational > > RFC on > > >>>>> IRTF stream, > > >>>>>> and the document uses the concepts introduced there > (e.g., > > "planes"). > > >>>>> This is > > >>>>>> very confusing. First, an IETF Proposed Standard should > > probably > > >>>>> refer to > > >>>>>> documents having IETF consensus. An example would be RFC > > 7491, albeit > > >>>>> there is > > >>>>>> other related work as well, e.g., in the TEAS WG. Second, > > Section 4.4 > > >>>>> is by and > > >>>>>> large decoupled from the rest of the document and not > > specific to > > >>>>> DetNet. > > >>>>>> Neither do other sections of the document refer to > the concepts > > >>>>> introduced in > > >>>>>> Section 4.4, nor does Section 4.4 use the DetNet > terminology or > > >>>>> discuss > > >>>>>> applicability to DetNet. Section 4.4 even mentions > > explicitly at the > > >>>>> end that > > >>>>>> it discusses aspects that are orthogonal to the DetNet > > architecture. > > >>>>> It is not > > >>>>>> at all clear why Section 4.4 is in this document. Section > > 4.4 could > > >>>>> be removed > > >>>>>> from the document without impacting the rest of the > document. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Minor issues: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Terminology "DetNet transport layer" > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> The term "transport layer" has a well-defined > meaning > > in the IETF, > > >>>>> e.g. > > >>>>>> originating from RFC 1122. While "transport" > and e.g. > > "transport > > >>>>> network" is > > >>>>>> used in the IETF for different technologies in > > different areas, I > > >>>>> think the > > >>>>>> term "transport layer" is typically understood to > > refer to > > >>>>> transport > > >>>>>> protocols such as TCP and UDP. As such, I > personally > > find the term > > >>>>> "DetNet > > >>>>>> transport layer" misleading and confusing. The > > confusion is easy > > >>>>> to see e.g. > > >>>>>> in Figure 4, where UDP (which is a transport > protocol > > as per RFC > > >>>>> 1122) sits > > >>>>>> on top of "transport". > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Based on the document it also may be > > solution/implementation > > >>>>> specific whether > > >>>>>> the "DetNet transport layer" is actually a separate > > protocol layer > > >>>>> compared > > >>>>>> to the "DetNet service layer". Thus it is not clear > > to me why the > > >>>>> word > > >>>>>> "layer" has to be used, specifically in combination > > "transport > > >>>>> layer". > > >>>>>> To me as, the word "transport layer" (and > "transport > > protocol") > > >>>>> should be > > >>>>>> used for protocols defined in TSV area, consistent > > with RFC 1122. > > >>>>> But this is > > >>>>>> probably a question to be sorted out by the IESG. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 9 > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> A DetNet node may have other resources requiring > > allocation > > >>>>> and/or > > >>>>>> scheduling, > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> This is just one of several examples for > inconsistent > > use of > > >>>>> terminology. > > >>>>>> What is a "DetNet node"? That term is not > introduced > > in Section > > >>>>> 2.1 > > >>>>>> * Page 14 > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> A DetNet network supports the dedication of a high > > proportion > > >>>>> (e.g. > > >>>>>> 75%) of the network bandwidth to DetNet flows. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> The 75% value is not reasoned. What prevents using > > 99% of the > > >>>>> bandwidth for > > >>>>>> DetNet traffic? > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 15: Figure 2 > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> If the term "transport layer" cannot be > avoided, the > > labels in > > >>>>> this figure > > >>>>>> should at least be expanded to "DetNet > transport layer". > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 18: Figure 4 > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> As already mentioned earlier, Figure 4 is > confusing. > > UDP is a > > >>>>> transport > > >>>>>> protocol. If the term "transport" cannot be > avoided, > > the labels in > > >>>>> this > > >>>>>> figure should at least be expanded to "DetNet > transport". > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 23 > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> If the source transmits less data than this limit > > >>>>>> allows, the unused resource such as link bandwidth > > can be made > > >>>>>> available by the system to non-DetNet packets. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Could there be additional requirements on the > use of > > unused > > >>>>> resources by > > >>>>>> non-DetNet packets, e.g., regarding preemption? > I am just > > >>>>> wondering... If > > >>>>>> that was possible, a statement like "... can be > made > > available by > > >>>>> the system > > >>>>>> to non-DetNet packets as long as all guarantees are > > fulfilled" > > >>>>> would be on > > >>>>>> the safe side, no? > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 27: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> DetNet achieves congestion protection and bounded > > delivery > > >>>>> latency by > > >>>>>> reserving bandwidth and buffer resources at every > > hop along the > > >>>>> path > > >>>>>> of the DetNet flow. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Why does this sentence use the word "hop"? As > far as > > I understand, > > >>>>> in DetNet > > >>>>>> bandwidth and buffer resources are reserved in each > > DetNet > > >>>>> intermediate node. > > >>>>>> If there were hops over IP routers not being DetNet > > intermediate > > >>>>> nodes, no > > >>>>>> resources would be reserved there. As per Section > > 4.3.3, it is > > >>>>> possible to > > >>>>>> deploy DetNet this way. And obviously there can be > > resource > > >>>>> bottlenecks below > > >>>>>> IP, on devices that are not routers... So does > "hop" > > here refer to > > >>>>> IP router > > >>>>>> hops or also to devices not processing IP (or > IP/MPLS)? > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 27: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Standard queuing and transmission selection > > algorithms allow a > > >>>>>> central controller to compute the latency > > contribution of each > > >>>>>> transit node to the end-to-end latency, ... > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> The text does not explain why a _central_ > controller > > is needed for > > >>>>> this > > >>>>>> computation. Why would a distributed control plane > > not be able to > > >>>>> realize > > >>>>>> this computation. Isn't this > implementation-specific? > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 32 > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> To somebody who is not deeply familiar with > DetNet, it is > > >>>>> impossible to parse > > >>>>>> the description of the examples in Section > 4.7.3. For > > instance, > > >>>>> "VID + > > >>>>>> multicast MAC address" is not introduced. I think > > this example > > >>>>> must be > > >>>>>> expaned with additional context and explanation > to be > > useful to > > >>>>> readers. > > >>>>>> * Page 34 > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> There are three classes of information that a > > central controller > > >>>>> or > > >>>>>> distributed control plane needs to know that can > > only be obtained > > >>>>>> from the end systems and/or nodes in the network. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Wouldn't it be sufficient to state "Provisioning of > > DetNet > > >>>>> requires knowledge > > >>>>>> about ...". Does it matter in this context > whether the > > >>>>> provisioning is done > > >>>>>> by a central controller or a distributed control > > plane? For > > >>>>> instance, could > > >>>>>> the same paragraph also apply to a network that > uses > > _multiple_ > > >>>>> central > > >>>>>> controllers, or hybrid combinations of central > > controllers and > > >>>>> distributed > > >>>>>> control planes? In general, an architecture > document > > should be > > >>>>> agnostic to > > >>>>>> implementation aspects unless there is a specific > > need. In this > > >>>>> specific > > >>>>>> case, I fail to see a need to discuss the > realization > > of the > > >>>>> control plane of > > >>>>>> a network. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Editorial nits: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 9: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> The low-level mechanisms described in Section 4.5 > > provide the > > >>>>>> necessary regulation of transmissions by an end > > system or > > >>>>>> intermediate node to provide congestion > protection. The > > >>>>> allocation > > >>>>>> of the bandwidth and buffers for a DetNet flow > requires > > >>>>> provisioning > > >>>>>> A DetNet node may have other resources requiring > > allocation > > >>>>> and/or > > >>>>>> scheduling, that might otherwise be > over-subscribed > > and trigger > > >>>>> the > > >>>>>> rejection of a reservation. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Probably a full stop is missing after > "provisioning". > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 11: "... along separate (disjoint non-SRLG) > paths ..." > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> I find this confusing. I would understand e.g. > "along > > separate > > >>>>>> (SRLG-disjoint) paths". > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 34: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> When using a peer- > > >>>>>> to-peer control plane, some of this > information may > > be required > > >>>>> by a > > >>>>>> system's neighbors in the network. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Would "acquired" be a better term? > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 34: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> o The identity of the system's neighbors, and the > > >>>>> characteristics of > > >>>>>> the link(s) between the systems, including the > > length (in > > >>>>>> nanoseconds) of the link(s). > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> "Latency" or "delay" would probably be a better > terms > > if the value > > >>>>> is > > >>>>>> measured in nanoseconds. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Page 35: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> DetNet is provides a Quality of Service (QoS), and > > as such, does > > >>>>> not > > >>>>>> directly raise any new privacy considerations. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Broken sentence > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> * Please expand acronyms on first use (e.g., OTN) > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> > > >>>> _______________________________________________ > > >>>> detnet mailing list > > >>>> detnet@ietf.org <mailto:detnet@ietf.org> > <mailto:detnet@ietf.org <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>> > > >>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/detnet > > > > _______________________________________________ > > detnet mailing list > > detnet@ietf.org <mailto:detnet@ietf.org> <mailto:detnet@ietf.org > <mailto:detnet@ietf.org>> > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/detnet > > >
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