Re: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-09.txt

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Wed, 11 July 2012 07:48 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-09.txt
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Hi Lionel,
>
> Hi,
>
> Benoit, it is true that there is in the RFC4005 an implicit reference 
> to the RFC3588 when describing the new command (AAR/AAA). It could be 
> useful to explicitly state that the definition of the new command 
> follows the rules described in RFC3588(bis).
>
That would work for me

Regards, Benoit.
>
> About Dieter's comment, the CCF specification of a command is clearly 
> defined in RFC3588(bis) with an explicit reference to RFC5234 for 
> further details, so I don't think that it is needed to provide again 
> the description in this specification and in any other diameter 
> specification referencing the RFC3588(bis).
>
> Regards,
>
> Lionel
>
> *De :*dieter.jacobsohn@telekom.de [mailto:dieter.jacobsohn@telekom.de]
> *Envoyé :* mercredi 11 juillet 2012 09:29
> *À :* bclaise@cisco.com; MORAND Lionel RD-CORE
> *Cc :* dime@ietf.org
> *Objet :* AW: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-09.txt
>
> Hello Benoit and Lionel
>
> as a reader of the Diameter specifications I would support a proposal 
> to define the notification within the document. Clearly "somewhere" it 
> is stated but for a simple reader it would be very helpful to have 
> such an description of the notification in the same document as it is 
> used.
>
> Best regards
>
> Dieter Jacobsohn
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> *Von:*dime-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:dime-bounces@ietf.org] *Im Auftrag 
> von *Benoit Claise
> *Gesendet:* Mittwoch, 11. Juli 2012 09:09
> *An:* lionel.morand@orange.com
> *Cc:* dime mailing list
> *Betreff:* Re: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-09.txt
>
> Hi Lionel,
>
>     Hi Benoit,
>
>       
>
>     - I could not find the meaning of * in, for example,
>
>       
>
>                                [ CHAP-Auth ]
>
>                                [ CHAP-Challenge ]
>
>                              * [ Framed-Compression ]
>
>                                [ Framed-Interface-Id ]
>
>                                [ Framed-IP-Address ]
>
>                              * [ Framed-IPv6-Prefix ]
>
>                                [ Framed-IP-Netmask ]
>
>                                [ Framed-MTU ]
>
>                                [ Framed-Protocol ]
>
>                                [ ARAP-Password ]
>
>                                [ ARAP-Security ]
>
>                              * [ ARAP-Security-Data ]
>
>                              * [ Login-IP-Host ]
>
>                              * [ Login-IPv6-Host ]
>
>                                [ Login-LAT-Group ]
>
>                                [ Login-LAT-Node ]
>
>                                [ Login-LAT-Port ]
>
>                                [ Login-LAT-Service ]
>
>                              * [ Tunneling ]
>
>                              * [ Proxy-Info ]
>
>                              * [ Route-Record ]
>
>                              * [ AVP ]
>
>     */[[LM]]/*the « * » in front the AVP means that 0, 1 or more AVP scan be present in the request (or in a Grouped AVP). It follows rules used in RFC3588 and defined in RFC 5234 (http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5234#section-3.6).
>
>       
>
> BC> Thanks for the education.
> Is this so obvious to the Diameter readers, including the newcomers, 
> that we don't need to mention it?
> In other words, am I the only one NOT knowing this? ;-)
>
> Regards, Benoit.
>
>
> Regards,
>   
> Lionel
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