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Re: [dnssd] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease

Abtin Keshavarzian <abtink@google.com> Wed, 17 August 2022 22:46 UTC

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Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2022 15:46:13 -0700
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease
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I read and reviewed the latest version of this document
(draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-02). It is clear and reads well and I
believe ready to publish.
Thanks,
Abtin.

On Wed, Aug 17, 2022 at 10:48 AM Jonathan Hui <jonhui=
40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> I have reviewed the latest version of this document
> (draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-02) and believe it is ready to publish (with
> some minor nits noted below).
>
> The OpenThread implementation of SRP includes the Update Lease option and
> is up-to-date with the latest draft. It is being used by a number of
> community members, especially those implementing Matter. I am not aware of
> any open issues regarding usage of the Update Lease option.
>
> Minor comments:
>
> Section 4: "the TSIG RR should appear _after_", should this be normative
> "SHOULD"?
>
> Section 5.1: many statements with non-normative "should", should these be
> normative "SHOULD"?
>
> --
> Jonathan Hui
>
>
>
> On Mon, Aug 8, 2022 at 3:45 PM David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi DNSSD enthusiasts,
>>
>> As promised during our meeting at IETF 114 two weeks ago, we are starting
>> a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease. As a
>> reminder of our timeline, this document was adopted by the DNSSD WG in
>> September 2021, folks made comments during that adoption call, and those
>> comments were addressed by the authors in July 2022. Additionally,
>> progressing this document is required for us to
>> publish draft-ietf-dnssd-srp. This WGLC will last for two weeks until
>> 2022-08-22 at 23:59 UTC. We're interested in hearing whether folks have
>> read this document and think it is ready for publication. We're also
>> interested in hearing from folks who think the document isn't ready, or who
>> see issues that need to be resolved before publication.
>>
>> The latest draft is available here:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/
>>
>> Please send responses to the DNSSD list as replies to this email.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> David and Chris
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