Re: [dnssd] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease

Jonathan Hui <jonhui@google.com> Wed, 17 August 2022 17:48 UTC

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From: Jonathan Hui <jonhui@google.com>
Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2022 10:48:04 -0700
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease
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I have reviewed the latest version of this document
(draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-02) and believe it is ready to publish (with
some minor nits noted below).

The OpenThread implementation of SRP includes the Update Lease option and
is up-to-date with the latest draft. It is being used by a number of
community members, especially those implementing Matter. I am not aware of
any open issues regarding usage of the Update Lease option.

Minor comments:

Section 4: "the TSIG RR should appear _after_", should this be normative
"SHOULD"?

Section 5.1: many statements with non-normative "should", should these be
normative "SHOULD"?

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Jonathan Hui



On Mon, Aug 8, 2022 at 3:45 PM David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi DNSSD enthusiasts,
>
> As promised during our meeting at IETF 114 two weeks ago, we are starting
> a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease. As a
> reminder of our timeline, this document was adopted by the DNSSD WG in
> September 2021, folks made comments during that adoption call, and those
> comments were addressed by the authors in July 2022. Additionally,
> progressing this document is required for us to
> publish draft-ietf-dnssd-srp. This WGLC will last for two weeks until
> 2022-08-22 at 23:59 UTC. We're interested in hearing whether folks have
> read this document and think it is ready for publication. We're also
> interested in hearing from folks who think the document isn't ready, or who
> see issues that need to be resolved before publication.
>
> The latest draft is available here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease/
>
> Please send responses to the DNSSD list as replies to this email.
>
> Thanks,
> David and Chris
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