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Re: [dnssd] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease

Tony Zhou <tonyzhou@google.com> Fri, 19 August 2022 05:19 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dnssd] WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease
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I have read the latest version of this document
(draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-02). It is clear and I think it is ready to
go forward (with some minor nits listed below).

Minor nits:
Section 4.1 "continue sending refresh messages (see below) as if the
server", here "refresh" may be capitalized since other appearances of
"Refresh message" in the article are capitalized.

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Best regards,
Tony Zhou

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