RE: [Forces-protocol] Re: protocol draft editing?

["Khosravi, Hormuzd M" <[e-mail]>]

Robert,

 

Weiming and myself are already working on this section...I will send out what I have shortly.

Some of the changes are pretty straightforward, e.g. remove section 6.6 :-)

 

Anyways we could definitely use help in the draft, there is lots of stuff that needs to be done

I will send out a list of other todo items shortly..

 

regards

Hormuzd

 

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From: Robert Haas [mailto:[e-mail]] 
Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 7:04 AM
To: Khosravi, Hormuzd M
Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]; Ligang Dong; Weiming Wang
Subject: Re: [Forces-protocol] Re: protocol draft editing?

 

Hormuzd,
Section 6 is heavily impacted by the shift to "everything is an LFB". Many sections and figures require complete re-editing. To ensure consistency, we need one person to do one editing pass on the entire section first. But your list says "everybody". 

What if I do this first pass before tomorrow ? Or has anyone started already ?

It also means that our description of the FE Protocol LFB must be enhanced, possibly including the multicast table that Zsolt started specifying.

Regards,
-Robert

Khosravi, Hormuzd M wrote:



Here is the distribution list...
 
Abstract - Avri
1. Introduction - Avri
2. Definitions - Weiming
3. Protocol Overview - Jamal
4. TML Requirements - Jamal
5. Common Header - Weiming, Ligang (Jamal/Robert)
6. Protocol Messages - Hormuzd, Weiming (I expect everyone to be
involved with this one)
7. Protocol Scenarios - Hormuzd, Ram
8. High Availability - Hormuzd
9. Security Considerations - Ram
10. References - Avri
11. Acknowledgments - All
Appendix
A. Implementation Notes - All?
 
I will directly modify the text for my particular section and send it
out to the team/Avri on a per section or per-subsection basis. That was
we can all work in parallel.
 
regards
Hormuzd 
 
-----Original Message-----
From: Jamal Hadi Salim [mailto:[e-mail]] 
Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2004 5:35 AM
To: [e-mail]
Cc: [e-mail]; Khosravi, Hormuzd M; [e-mail]; Ligang Dong;
Weiming Wang; Robert Haas
Subject: Re: [Forces-protocol] Re: protocol draft editing?
 
Avri must be on travel or tied up somewhere around the globe.
The latest i could find is:
http://psg.com/~avri/forces/draft/Archive-Forces-Protocol-02.zip
 
Does anyone know if theres something newer or should we start here?
Hormuzd can you post that todo distribution?
 
cheers,
jamal
 
On Tue, 2004-10-19 at 19:23, Jamal Hadi Salim wrote:
  

	On Tue, 2004-10-19 at 11:07, Jamal Hadi Salim wrote:
	    

		Now that we seem to have made progress on the basics..
		Avri,
		Could you post a URL to the xml docs that we could start editing?
		We could start with the TODO action items as posted by Hormuzd.
		 
		cheers,
		jamal
		      

	 
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