Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Tue, 21 April 2015 06:58 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05
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Thanks for your review, Christer. I have balloted no-objection for this draft in the upcoming IESG telechat. Jari On 13 Apr 2015, at 07:10, Uma Chunduri <uma.chunduri@ericsson.com> wrote: > Hi Christer, > > Thanks for your review and I shall address both comments you made below in the next revision. > > -- > Uma C. > > From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com] > Sent: Saturday, April 11, 2015 5:56 AM > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv.all@tools.ietf.org > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> > > Document: draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 > > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > > Review Date: 11 April 2015 > > IETF LC End Date: 8 April 2015 > > IETF Telechat Date: N/A > > Summary: The document is well written, and almost ready for publication. I only have a couple of minor editorial comments (see below). > > Major Issues: None > > Minor Issues: None > > Editorial nits: > > Q1: In the Introduction, please expand “IS-IS” on first occurrence (outside the Abstract) > > Q2: In the Introduction, could you add some reference to “IS-IS” on the first occurrence? > > > _______________________________________________ > Isis-wg mailing list > Isis-wg@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/isis-wg
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-exten… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-e… Uma Chunduri
- Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-ART review of draft-i… Jari Arkko