Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations-01
Julien ÉLIE <julien@trigofacile.com> Thu, 08 December 2016 21:04 UTC
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Hi Jouni, > What you propose below is what I was thinking about. So yes, OK with that. OK, thanks. Now integrated in the future revised I-D. -- Julien >> On Dec 7, 2016, at 1:19 PM, Julien ÉLIE <julien@trigofacile.com> wrote: >> >> Hi Jouni, >> >> First of all, thanks for having taken time to review the document. >> >> >>> I think this document is ready for publication. >>> >>> I have comment, which is just a suggestion concerning document >>> structure. Currently the updates/changes to RFC4642 are listed in >>> Introduction. On the other hand there is a specific section for >>> recommendations. I would move the updates/changes to RFC4642 into its >>> own section just to make the document a bit more structured. >> >> Is it OK if I move from Section 1 "Introduction", the part "Notably, this document updates [RFC4642]... of [RFC7525] instead." to a new Section 2 "Updates/Changes to RFC 4642"? >> I'll then drop "Notably" in the pasted wording, and mention that detailed changes are listed in Appendix A of the document. >> The "Recommendations" Section becomes Section 3, and so on. >> >> Or did you have something else in mind? >> >> Thanks again, >> >> -- >> Julien ÉLIE
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