Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00

Mike Shand <imc.shand@gmail.com> Wed, 18 December 2013 14:25 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
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I agree.

     Mike

On 17/12/2013 14:52, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:
> Dan -
>
> Thanx for the review.
> I have no objection to your suggestion. I would hope this change can be done by the RFC Editor.
>
>     Les
>
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) [mailto:dromasca@avaya.com]
>> Sent: Tuesday, December 17, 2013 5:35 AM
>> To: gen-art@ietf.org
>> Cc: draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic.all@tools.ietf.org
>> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
>>
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
>> please see the FAQ at
>>
>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>>
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
>> receive.
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
>> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
>> Review Date: 12/17/13
>> IETF LC End Date: 12/24/13
>> IESG Telechat date:
>>
>> Summary: Ready
>>
>> Major issues:
>>
>> Minor issues:
>>
>> It may be more cautious refer to the 'latest available' version of the IS-IS
>> standard as we cannot be completely sure that the Second Edition will also be
>> the very last one. Suggested change in Section 1:
>>
>> OLD:
>>
>>     All references to IS-IS should be to ISO/IEC 10589:2002, Second
>>     Edition and RFC 1142 is only of historic interest.
>>
>> NEW:
>>
>>     All references to IS-IS should be to the latest edition of the IS-IS
>>     standard (currently ISO/IEC 10589:2002, Second
>>     Edition) and RFC 1142 is only of historic interest.
>>
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>
>>
>>