Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00

"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Tue, 17 December 2013 14:52 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
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Dan -

Thanx for the review.
I have no objection to your suggestion. I would hope this change can be done by the RFC Editor.

   Les


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) [mailto:dromasca@avaya.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, December 17, 2013 5:35 AM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
> 
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
> please see the FAQ at
> 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
> receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review Date: 12/17/13
> IETF LC End Date: 12/24/13
> IESG Telechat date:
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> It may be more cautious refer to the 'latest available' version of the IS-IS
> standard as we cannot be completely sure that the Second Edition will also be
> the very last one. Suggested change in Section 1:
> 
> OLD:
> 
>    All references to IS-IS should be to ISO/IEC 10589:2002, Second
>    Edition and RFC 1142 is only of historic interest.
> 
> NEW:
> 
>    All references to IS-IS should be to the latest edition of the IS-IS
>    standard (currently ISO/IEC 10589:2002, Second
>    Edition) and RFC 1142 is only of historic interest.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
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> 
>