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From: Corey Bonnell <Corey.Bonnell@digicert.com>
To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>, "draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05
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Hi Paul,
Thanks again for your careful review. -07 resolves the malformed section 
reference: 
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-06&url2=draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-07&difftype=--html

Thanks,
Corey

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Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05

Corey,

On 4/3/24 8:45 AM, Corey Bonnell wrote:
> Hello Paul,
> Thank you for your detailed review and insightful feedback. We have
> just uploaded -06 to the Datatracker:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis/.
>
> We believe -06 addresses all the concerns that you raised. Please let
> us know if there are still unresolved items.

Yes, you have nicely addressed all my concerns. But one error crept in:

In sec 3.2.1 there is "{#sha1-sec}". I presume this is intended to be a 
reference that has been mangled.

	Thanks,
	Paul

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