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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Wed, 03 April 2024 14:19 UTC

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To: Corey Bonnell <Corey.Bonnell@digicert.com>, "draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05
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Corey,

On 4/3/24 8:45 AM, Corey Bonnell wrote:
> Hello Paul,
> Thank you for your detailed review and insightful feedback. We have just
> uploaded -06 to the Datatracker:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis/.
> 
> We believe -06 addresses all the concerns that you raised. Please let us know
> if there are still unresolved items.

Yes, you have nicely addressed all my concerns. But one error crept in:

In sec 3.2.1 there is "{#sha1-sec}". I presume this is intended to be a 
reference that has been mangled.

	Thanks,
	Paul

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