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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Wed, 03 April 2024 15:52 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05
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Looks good!

On 4/3/24 11:09 AM, Corey Bonnell wrote:
> Hi Paul,
> Thanks again for your careful review. -07 resolves the malformed section
> reference:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-06&url2=draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-07&difftype=--html
> 
> Thanks,
> Corey
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
> Sent: Wednesday, April 3, 2024 10:19 AM
> To: Corey Bonnell <Corey.Bonnell@digicert.com>;
> draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis.all@ietf.org
> Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>; last-call@ietf.org; LAMPS
> <spasm@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05
> 
> Corey,
> 
> On 4/3/24 8:45 AM, Corey Bonnell wrote:
>> Hello Paul,
>> Thank you for your detailed review and insightful feedback. We have
>> just uploaded -06 to the Datatracker:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis/.
>>
>> We believe -06 addresses all the concerns that you raised. Please let
>> us know if there are still unresolved items.
> 
> Yes, you have nicely addressed all my concerns. But one error crept in:
> 
> In sec 3.2.1 there is "{#sha1-sec}". I presume this is intended to be a
> reference that has been mangled.
> 
> 	Thanks,
> 	Paul

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