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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-netconf-call-home-11.txt

Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Thu, 22 October 2015 22:21 UTC

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From: Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>
To: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-netconf-call-home-11.txt
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Hi Kent,

On 10/22/2015 06:03 PM, Kent Watsen wrote:
> [+barry]
>
> I apologize to reply to myself, but I would be remiss to not mention that Barry Leiba had a related COMMENT on the "must immediately start” text.   His suggestion is to remove the words “MUST immediately” (i.e. Just have “start”).  As he writes: "What *else* might the client [server] do, which merits a MUST here?”
>
> While I personally do think that it is “MUST immediately”, I think that the wording is still be accurate without it...and thus simply removing these two words provides an alternate way to resolve Suresh’s comment.  Thoughts?

That works for me as well. Go for it.

Cheers
Suresh

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