Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Tue, 30 January 2018 17:32 UTC

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To: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11
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Ok.  I'll push an update based on these changes in the next few days,
barring additional comments.


On 30.01.18 17:02, Dan Romascanu wrote:
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> On Tue, Jan 30, 2018 at 5:54 PM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in
> <mailto:alissa@cooperw.in>> wrote:
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>     > On Jan 29, 2018, at 1:12 PM, Pete Resnick
>     <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com <mailto:presnick@qti.qualcomm.com>> wrote:
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>     >
>     >> 8. Section 4:
>     >>
>     >> 'It is anticipated that
>     >>   those roles will evolve.  The IASA is responsible for keeping the
>     >>   community informed in this regard, and MAY do so without updating
>     >>   this memo.'
>     >>
>     >> I would be a little concerned if some of the key roles would
>     change without
>     >> this document being updated. I understand the need to be
>     flexible, but we need
>     >> to put some limits. Maybe at least emphasize the need to inform
>     the community
>     >> by a MUST. For example:
>     >>
>     >> 'It is anticipated that
>     >>   those roles will evolve.  The IASA MUST keep the
>     >>   community informed in this regard, and MAY do so without updating
>     >>   this memo.'
>     >
>     > I don't think the MUST significantly changes the meaning, so I'm
>     ambivalent about the change. Since this text was put in to address
>     a comment in AD Evaluation, I'm inclined to hear from Alissa.
>
>     Perhaps the concern could be addressed by saying “without first
>     updating this memo”? The point I raised is that this document
>     shouldn’t gate the ability for the roles to change, but certainly
>     if they do change the document should be updated (or obsoleted by
>     a new document) to match the reality.
>
>     Thanks,
>     Alissa
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>
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> That would be fine with me.
>
> Regards,
>
> Dan
>