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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Thu, 01 February 2018 17:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11
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I wrote:


On 29.01.18 23:07, Eliot Lear wrote:
>
> The line in question is as follows:
>
>       This includes,
>       but is not limited to, native and unmodified IPv4 and IPv6
>       connectivity, global reachability, and no additional limitation
>       that would materially impact their Internet use.
>
> How about:
>
> This includes,
>       but is not limited to, native and unmodified IPv4 and IPv6
>       connectivity, global reachability, and no additional limitation
>       that would materially impact their Internet use.

And what I meant to propose was this:

        It MUST be possible to provision
         Internet Access to the Facility and IETF Hotels that allows
         local attendees to utilize the Internet for all their IETF,
         business, and day to day needs; as well as sufficient
         bandwidth and access for remote attendees. This includes, but
is not
         limited to, native and unmodified IPv4 and IPv6 connectivity,
         global reachability, and no  additional limitation that would
         materially impact their Internet use.
 

Sorry for the confusion.

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