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Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> Wed, 16 March 2011 21:19 UTC

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> From: Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com>
> Date: March 16, 2011 2:16:57 PM PDT
> To: Gen-art <gen-art@ietf.org>
> Cc: Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com>, "draft-ietf-sidr-iana-objects@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-sidr-iana-objects@ietf.org>
> Subject: [GenArt] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-iana-objects-01
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-sidr-iana-objects. For 
> background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other last call comments 
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-sidr-iana-objects-01
> Title: RPKI Objects Issued by IANA
> Reviewer: Wassim M Haddad
> Review Date: 16-March-2011
> IETF LC End Date: 11-March-2011
> IESG Telechat date: 17-March 2011
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but it would be helpful for the reader to clarify one item
> 
> - Major issue: none
> - Minor issue: in the abstract, the draft says that "it provides specific directions to IANA" then it ends with: "it should use". 
> The reader might be confused as to what "specific" vs "should" can mean in this context.
> 
> idem for s as to why there is a SHOULD again in page 7 (section 5: Reserved Resources): it mentions "SHOULD" issue an AS0 ROA.  
> 
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Wassim H.

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