Re: [Errata Rejected] RFC7234 (4334)

Tony Hansen <tony@att.com> Tue, 14 April 2015 00:22 UTC

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I have a feeling that this is not a problem with the document, but 
instead with the tooling.

That is, the missing piece of information is which HTML-ized version of 
the document was Antonio Vera looking at?

If he was looking at http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7234, then yup, it's 
pointing at the wrong document. The htmlizer tool on tools.ietf.org 
picked up the "Section ..." text and made that into a link to the 
section within the current document.

However, if he was looking at the files in github, he would have seen a 
link to the proper document.


So I think there is nothing that needs to be done here by anyone in the 
http group. But it might be worth poking Henrik to take a look at the 
rfcmarkup tool to see if an improvement can be made.

OR, anyone else can take a look at the rfcmarkup code and see if they 
can come up with a code fix. I'm sure Henrik would love to buy it back.

     Tony Hansen

On 4/13/15 7:51 PM, Mark Nottingham wrote:
> Antonio,
>
> Thanks for noticing that. I suspect that Julian will correct it in our online source at:
>    https://github.com/httpwg/http11bis
> .. and it'll filter through to the places where we can get it in time.
>
> If you like, you can raise an issue here:
>    https://github.com/httpwg/http11bis/issues
>
> Cheers,
>
>
>
>> On 13 Apr 2015, at 1:43 pm, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>
>> The following errata report has been rejected for RFC7234,
>> "Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Caching".
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7234&eid=4334
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> Status: Rejected
>> Type: Editorial
>>
>> Reported by: Antonio Vera <antonio.ignacio.vera@gmail.com>
>> Date Reported: 2015-04-12
>> Rejected by: Barry Leiba (IESG)
>>
>> Section: 5.3
>>
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> The Expires value is an HTTP-date timestamp, as defined in Section
>>    7.1.1.1 of [RFC7231].
>>
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> The Expires value is an HTTP-date timestamp, as defined in Section
>>    7.1.1.1 of [RFC7231].
>>
>> Notes
>> -----
>> There's no error in the text itself, but the address of the link in 7.1.1.1 is pointing to a hashtag in RFC 7234, not RFC 7231 as it should.
>>
>> Currently, 7.1.1.1 points to: http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7234#section-7.1.1.1
>> It should point to: http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7231#section-7.1.1.1
>> --VERIFIER NOTES--
>> The RFC Editor has nothing to do with the HTML versions on tools.ietf.org, which are unofficial versions, with the HTML conversion on a best-effort basis.
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC7234 (draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-26)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Caching
>> Publication Date    : June 2014
>> Author(s)           : R. Fielding, Ed., M. Nottingham, Ed., J. Reschke, Ed.
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Hypertext Transfer Protocol Bis
>> Area                : Applications
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>
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