Re: [I18ndir] [art] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-bray-unichars-04.txt

Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com> Sun, 17 September 2023 03:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: [I18ndir] [art] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-bray-unichars-04.txt
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 Took a few of them.  One comment:

On Sep 15, 2023 at 11:39:32 AM, Rob Sayre <sayrer@gmail.com> wrote:

>
> > Note that escaping techniques such as those in the JSON example above
> cannot be used to circumvent this sort of character-repertoire restriction,
>
> Instead:
>
> Note that escaping techniques such as those in the JSON example above
> cannot be used to circumvent the restrictions of a character repertoire,
>
> [rationale: "character repertoire" is not hyphenated elsewhere,
>

The title of the section is “Restricting Character Repertoires” and thus
“character-repertoire restriction” works because “character repertoire” is
now an adjective modifying “restriction” and adjectival phrases should be
hyphenated.