Re: [Idr] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08

["Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,

Ack. The RFC8986 reference is there right next to the usage of PSP/USP, however I realize that it would be still helpful to expand them on the first use in this document.

Those changes are in the edit buffer and will come in the next version.

Thanks,
Ketan

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From: tom petch <[e-mail]> 
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Subject: Re: Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08

From: Idr <[e-mail]> on behalf of Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) <ketant=[e-mail]>
Sent: 24 June 2021 13:17

Hi Dan,

Thanks a lot for your review and feedback.

Regarding your comment; we've chosen to expand all abbreviations on first use in the document instead of an abbreviation section. It is possible that we might have missed something or not added references for them. It would help a lot if you could point to a few such instances so we can fix them.

<tp>

USP (Unique Selling Point?)
PSP

They both get an expansion in RFC8986

Tom Petch.

Thanks,
Ketan

From: Dan Romascanu <[e-mail]>
Sent: 24 June 2021 16:25
To: Dan Romascanu <[e-mail]>
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Subject: Re: Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08

In the second paragraph, I meant Section 10.

Sorry for skipping that.

Regards

Dan


On Thu, Jun 24, 2021 at 11:16 AM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready

Ready with one editorial comment.

The document is well written, but it requires good familiarity with BGP-LS and also reading 4 companion documents which are all work-in-progress. My principal editorial comment would be that an abbreviations section (with references to the sources of the terms) would greatly improve readability and make the life easier for future users of the document.

I appreciate Section of the document which describes the operations and manageability aspects following the recommendations of RFC 5706. This is the section in the document that must be read by operators. Note that it looks short but is actually quite rich in information and refers to a few other documents.