Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-12

Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> Tue, 09 March 2021 16:25 UTC

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David: 

 

I would like to review the draft after your revision for the AD’s Comments.   I can do this after you submit -13.txt or before.   

 

I suspect that Alvaro will have a few minor comments on -13.txt so it can work in parallel. 

 

Cheers, Sue 

 

From: David Smith (djsmith) [mailto:djsmith@cisco.com] 
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Subject: Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-12

 

Hi,

 

We believe we’ve addressed all of Alvaro’s comments. If any other feedback, please let us know. Otherwise, we’ll post v13 on Monday 4/15.

 

Thanks,

 

/dave

 

 

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Date: Wednesday, February 24, 2021 at 10:35 AM
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Subject: Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-12

 

Juan:

 

Hi!

 

That part looks ok to me.

 

Thanks!

 

Alvaro.

 

On February 24, 2021 at 7:52:47 AM, Juan Alcaide (jalcaide) (jalcaide@cisco.com) wrote:

We assumed it was understood, but it's always better to have a new set of eyes 😉

 

We did some rewording below. Tried to simplify the abstract and expand some explanation in introduction (simpler than in Motivation section)

 

Let us know if there is need for more rewording.