Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW comment period
Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com> Tue, 10 September 2019 20:45 UTC
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From: Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>
Date: Tue, 10 Sep 2019 13:45:17 -0700
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Subject: Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW comment period
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
Cc: Richard Barnes <rlb@ipv.sx>, Michael StJohns <msj@nthpermutation.com>, RFC Interest <rfc-interest@rfc-editor.org>, IETF Discuss List <ietf@ietf.org>
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On Tue, Sep 10, 2019 at 1:39 PM Brian E Carpenter < brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote: > > This draft disclaims or contradicts RFC 6635 at a few points. > > Do we really need to worry about that? This is a time of change and I > don't think it matters if we deviate from the letter of a 7-year-old > Informational document. > Not Richard, but it seems to me that either one feels constrained by these documents or one does not. And if not, then I think we need to more generally ask whether the 6635 structure is even approximately right. -Ekr Regards > Brian Carpenter > > On 11-Sep-19 08:00, Richard Barnes wrote: > > Hi Mike, > > > > Thanks for taking the time to put this together. It looks much more > like what I would expect an SOW / JD to look like than prior drafts. > > > > Unfortunately, I don't think it's a suitable starting point for a > process that is premised on RFC 6635. Despite the fact that you've called > it a PM, the contractor being engaged here will act as RSE, even if only on > an interim basis. So RFC 6635 clearly applies. > > > > This draft disclaims or contradicts RFC 6635 at a few points. > Specifically, the paragraphs in the summary starting "The PM, as acting > RSE, ..." and "The general responsibilities...." are incompatible with RFC > 6635, and the "Reporting Relationships" section significantly underplays > the role of the RSOC. > > > > One of the foundational ideas in forming the LLC was that it would > follow the will of the community, and RFC 6635 encodes the community's > expectation of how the RSE role should be realized. So it is incumbent on > the LLC to follow the RFC (including, for example, facilitating the RSOC's > oversight), and this solicitation needs to reflect that. > > > > In case the RSOC does choose to use draw on this document, a couple of > more specific comments are below. > > > > --Richard > > > > > > - I don't see a lot of value in calling this role a PM, as opposed to > just a temporary RSE. > > > > - Under "Education and Experience Requirements", I would lead with the > leadership requirement (i.e., swap the first two bullets). As has been > discussed at length here, the RSE (even interim) is not an editor. > > > > - There's still some ambiguity here about the relationship to the RPC > and Publisher. If I understand the intent here correctly, the idea is that > this PM is not PM'ing the RPC, but rather observing and opining on their > performance (and providing advice as necessary), as input to someone at the > LLC who actually manages that contract. But that seems in conflict with > the deliverables that use verbs like "coordinate" and "resolve issues". It > would be good to clarify this, probably in the "Reporting Relationships" > section. > > > > - As others have noted, the April 1 RFCs belong to the ISE, not the RSE. > > > > On Sun, Sep 8, 2019 at 11:51 AM Michael StJohns <msj@nthpermutation.com > <mailto:msj@nthpermutation..com>> wrote: > > > > After thinking about it a bit, I decided I really didn't like the > SOW as > > it mostly ignored the input the community had given in the > discussion to > > the run up to the SOW. So I wrote a new one. This one mostly > > completely replaces the project summary with something a bit clearer > for > > the bidders and I think more accurately describes the role of the PM > as > > acting RSE. The reporting relationship was changed to more > accurately > > reflect the legal relationship between the bidder, the LLC and the > RSOC > > and to constrain some of the issues we encountered in the last few > months. > > > > Much of the Education and experience section survived, albeit > rearranged > > and word twiddled in places. > > > > Ditto for the skills section. > > > > The "Operational Oversight" section is replaced by "Typical > > Deliverables" and broken up into three sections as I suggested in an > > earlier email. > > > > I also added an "optional deliverable" to cover April fool's RFCs. > > > > This is basically an SOW for an RSE, but with the exclusion of > planning > > for evolution of the series. That was the only thing I could find as > > "strategic". > > > > Discuss! > > > > Mike > > > > > > > >
- Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW comment pe… Michael StJohns
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… RFC ISE (Adrian Farrel)
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Michael StJohns
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… Lucy Lynch
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… Andrew G. Malis
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Richard Barnes
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Eric Rescorla
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Richard Barnes
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Richard Barnes
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Salz, Rich
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Michael StJohns
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… Salz, Rich
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Michael StJohns
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Sarah Banks
- Re: Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SOW commen… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… S Moonesamy
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [rfc-i] Try this: was Re: New proposal/New SO… S Moonesamy