Re: Last Call: <draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-10.txt> (Intellectual Property Rights in IETF Technology) to Best Current Practice

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Sun, 22 January 2017 18:34 UTC

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> Text suggestions: … WG design teams [see BCP 25] and other design teams …

Close, thank you!

(But how about adjusting as follows: “… WG design teams [see BCP 25] and other design teams intended as IETF design teams …” ?)

Jari