Re: Last Call: <draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-10.txt> (Intellectual Property Rights in IETF Technology) to Best Current Practice

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Mon, 23 January 2017 12:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-10.txt> (Intellectual Property Rights in IETF Technology) to Best Current Practice
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On Jan 22, 2017, at 1:33 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote:

> 
>> Text suggestions: … WG design teams [see BCP 25] and other design teams …
> 
> Close, thank you!
> 
> (But how about adjusting as follows: “… WG design teams [see BCP 25] and other design teams intended as IETF design teams …” ?)

Perhaps: “… WG design teams [see BCP 25] and other design teams that intend to deliver an output to the IETF …”

Russ