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Re: [ipwave] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-28: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Wed, 25 May 2022 10:53 UTC

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Date: Wed, 25 May 2022 19:52:33 +0900
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-28: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hi Zahed,
According to your comment, I will change the last sentence in the Abstract
of
the revision of this document as follows:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
- OLD:
Next, for IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
and Security & Privacy), and then enumerates gaps for the extensions
of those IPv6 protocols for IPv6-based vehicular networking.

- NEW:
Next, for IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
and Security & Privacy).
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

On Wed, May 25, 2022 at 12:54 PM Zaheduzzaman Sarker <
zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Thanks for addressing my comments.
>
> I think all of those looks nice. However, the changes in abstract still
> does not seems right. This part - “enumerates gaps for the extensions of
> those
> IPv6 protocols” seems still unnecessary and does not add any extra
> information to the term “gap analysis”
>
> //Zahed
>
> On 19 May 2022, at 21:31, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> <Revision-Letter-on-IPWAVE-PS-Document-29-2022-05-19-v1.pdf>
>
>
>

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