Re: [ldapext] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject-06.txt

Sean Leonard <dev+ietf@seantek.com> Fri, 26 September 2014 14:10 UTC

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Couple of nits:

Nit:
Why is the attribute named "intlMailAdr", instead of "intlMailAddr"?

Nit: 1. @2   (means Section 1. at page 2)

"Therefore this documents defines" ->
"Therefore this document defines"

Nit: 1. @2
"Often there is a need to associate a, most times non-personal, Internet 
mail address with an arbitrary object" ->
"Often the need arises to associate an Internet mail address (which most 
times is not personal) with an arbitrary object"

Nit: 1. @2
"so applications can lookup where" ->
"so application can look up where"

Nit: 1. @2
"It allows to add an Internet mail address" ->
"It allows adding an Internet mail address"

There are also a couple of bigger things...which I will post in a 
separate e-mail.

Sean

On 9/26/2014 5:15 AM, Michael Ströder wrote:
> HI!
>
> I've sent this draft to the RFC editor for review.
> Anyone here willing to act as reviewer?
>
> Still sorting out some idnits issues for next version but those are only minor
> details.
>
> Ciao, Michael.
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject-06.txt
> Date: Fri, 26 Sep 2014 04:59:34 -0700
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
> To: Michael Stroeder <michael@stroeder.com>om>, Michael Stroeder
> <michael@stroeder.com>
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>
> A new version of I-D, draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject-06.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Michael Stroeder and posted to the
> IETF repository.
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> Name:		draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject
> Revision:	06
> Title:		Lightweight Directory Access Protocol (LDAP): Auxiliary Object Class
> 'mailboxRelatedObject'
> Document date:	2014-09-26
> Group:		Individual Submission
> Pages:		5
> URL:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject-06.txt
> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject/
> Htmlized:       http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject-06
> Diff:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject-06
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> Abstract:
>     This document defines the auxiliary object class
>     'mailboxRelatedObject' that can be used to associate an arbitrary
>     object with an Internet mail address.  Furthermore an attribute
>     'intlMailAdr' is defined for storing fully internationalized Internet
>     mail addresses.
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