Re: [ldapext] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-stroeder-mailboxrelatedobject-06.txt

[Michael Ströder <[e-mail]>]

Sean,

thanks for your review.

Fixes of nits herein will be in -07.

Sean Leonard wrote:
> Why is the attribute named "intlMailAdr", instead of "intlMailAddr"?

Because of me being a native German speaker.
English "address" is "Adresse" in German. ;-)

Fixed.

> Nit: 1. @2   (means Section 1. at page 2)
> 
> "Therefore this documents defines" ->
> "Therefore this document defines"

Fixed.

> Nit: 1. @2
> "Often there is a need to associate a, most times non-personal, Internet mail
> address with an arbitrary object" ->
> "Often the need arises to associate an Internet mail address (which most times
> is not personal) with an arbitrary object"

Fixed.

> 
> Nit: 1. @2
> "so applications can lookup where" ->
> "so application can look up where"

Fixed.

> Nit: 1. @2
> "It allows to add an Internet mail address" ->
> "It allows adding an Internet mail address"

Fixed.

> There are also a couple of bigger things...which I will post in a separate
> e-mail.

Looking forward to your comments.

Ciao, Michael.