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Juan Carlos Zuniga <juancarlos.zuniga@sigfox.com> Sat, 29 October 2016 22:44 UTC

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From: Juan Carlos Zuniga <juancarlos.zuniga@sigfox.com>
To: Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>, lp-wan <lp-wan@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [lp-wan] overview draft with some text...
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Hi Stephen,

Thanks for posting the draft!

I noticed that the goal of supporting common IP services on these LPWAN technologies is mentioned in the abstract and in the intro. However, the document focuses on differences and gaps and does not say much about common goals. Perhaps we should also add some text about the shared goals for all LPWAN technologies, which according to the charter would include the definition of common 1) management features, 2) security features, and 3) application profiles.

Also, I've recently posted a revision of the sigfox draft to update some figures that were mentioned in July. Since we are saying "as of today" in section 4.3.1 of draft-farrell-lpwan-overview-01, could you please update the second paragraph with the figures in: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-zuniga-lpwan-sigfox-system-description-01#section-7   

Thanks,

Juan Carlos 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: lp-wan [mailto:lp-wan-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Stephen Farrell
> Sent: October 29, 2016 1:57 AM
> To: lp-wan@ietf.org
> Subject: [lp-wan] overview draft with some text...
> 
> 
> Hiya,
> 
> I've incorporated descriptive text about some of the "input" technologies for
> lpwan in -01 of the overview draft. [1] That includes text from a lora draft
> that Alper and I also posted recently [2] and from the existing sigfox and nb-
> iot drafts. Next up will be adding text from the gap analysis work in the
> places indicated. I hope to post that before the cutoff. We may also get text
> on WI-SUN by then too.
> 
> Comments on any inaccuracies or omissions in [1] are of course very
> welcome. There's a github repo [3] if anyone prefers that. (Though my github
> foo is modest so bear with me if taking that approach:-) I'll make sure that
> any substantive discussion initiated on github is reflected to the list.
> 
> Cheers,
> S.
> 
> [1] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-farrell-lpwan-overview-01
> [2] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-farrell-lpwan-lora-overview-01
> [3] https://github.com/sftcd/lpwan-ov
>

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