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Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] Fwd: Re: Request for MIB review of draft-ietf-storm-iscsimib

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Mon, 28 January 2013 08:02 UTC

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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
To: Michael MacFaden <mrm@macfaden.com>, Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>
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Hi Mike,

Did you also comment concerning the Security Considerations section?

It seems that it is not updated according to the last template version on the wiki as per https://svn.tools.ietf.org/area/ops/trac/wiki/mib-security# (the last but final paragraph and the corresponding references).

I noticed this while performing the Gen-ART review of the document.

Regards,

Dan



From: mib-doctors-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:mib-doctors-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Michael MacFaden
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Subject: Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] Fwd: Re: Request for MIB review of draft-ietf-storm-iscsimib

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Hi Benoit,

I reviewed the current #3 draft at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsimib/
the nits checker had a few items to review:
http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-storm-iscsimib-03.tx

There exist editorial comments to clean up, some noted below

- -- <a href="./draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03">draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03</a> &amp; remove this note.

but otherwise looks good to me.

Tests performed:
prunus% smistrip draft-ietf-storm-iscsimib-03
smistrip draft-ietf-storm-iscsimib-03
ISCSI-MIB: 3761 lines.
prunus% smilint -l9 ISCSI-MIB
smilint -l9 ISCSI-MIB
prunus% smidump -f tree ISCSI-MIB

Compared output of smidump -f identifiers from 01 draft to 03, no changes.
Verified all nonscalars begin with iscsiInstIndex index as described per section 4 (Relationship to SNMP Contexts)
Verified marker objects were deprecated as stated in section 5.
Verified all three new objects added
  iscsiInstXNodeArchitecture
 iscsiSsnTaskReporting
  iscsiSsnProtocolLevel

items resolved from last review.
- - 4. IANA Considerations - check
- - 8. Intellectual property section -check
Rest of issues I reported in prior review were resolved previously on the list.

s/
Mike MacFaden

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