Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16

Bo Burman <bo.burman@ericsson.com> Fri, 08 May 2020 14:38 UTC

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From: Bo Burman <bo.burman@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16
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Taking Christer's proposed changes to Paul's comments into account, I think
this is in pretty good shape.

These are my -16 review comments:

 

1.	NIT:
In section 1, suggest changing "RTCWeb" to "WebRTC" since I assume the
technology rather than the IETF WG is meant?
2.	MINOR:
In sections 3.1 and 4.3 the subprotocol parameter values use capital "MSRP".
Based on Paul's comment #6 that there is an existing IANA "msrp"
registration, I think you should use lowercase, because that IANA registry
is case-sensitive (see RFC 7936 Section 2
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7936#section-2> ).
3.	NIT:
Sections 4.6, 4.7, and 4.8 use '"m" line'; suggest aligning with many other
recent documents and add an equal sign to use '"m=" line' instead.
4.	MINOR:
In section 7.2, you use MMUSIC Chairs as contact; please use IESG and
iesg@ietf.org <mailto:iesg@ietf.org>  instead to align with recent practice
and avoid becoming dependent on the existence of a WG.

 

Cheers,

/Bo (as individual)

 

 

From: Bo Burman <bo.burman@ericsson.com> 
Sent: den 6 maj 2020 17:21
To: mmusic <mmusic@ietf.org>
Cc: mmusic-chairs@ietf.org
Subject: WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16

 

Greetings MMUSIC ,

This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft:

 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-chan
nel-16 

as Proposed Standard. Please review and provide any comments you may have on
the document by

Wednesday, May 20, 2020.

 

Comments should be sent to the document authors and the MMUSIC WG list.

If you review the document but do not have any comments, please send a note
to that effect as well. 

Thanks,

/Bo

(MMUSIC co-chair)