Re: [MMUSIC] 1 Week WGLC for draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-15

Ari Keränen <ari.keranen@ericsson.com> Wed, 29 May 2013 09:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] 1 Week WGLC for draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-15
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Hi Magnus,

The changes look good to me.


Thanks,
Ari

On 5/27/13 12:59 PM, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
> Hi Ari,
>
> Thanks for these fixes. I have implemented them:
>
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-16
>
> Cheers
>
> Magnus
>
> On 2013-05-27 00:07, Ari Keränen wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Here's a few editorial things worth considering fixing.
>>
>>
>> 3.  Solution Overview
>>
>>     9.   When the client has concluded its connectivity checks, including
>>          promoting candidates, and has correspondingly received the
>>
>> s/promoting candidates/nominating candidate pairs/
>> (using "promoting/promoted" also later in the document)
>>
>>
>> 4.2.  ICE Candidate Transport Header Parameter
>>
>>     <component-id>: [...]
>>     It MUST start at 1 and MUST increment by 1 for each component
>>     of a particular candidate
>>
>> s/of a particular candidate/of a particular media stream/
>>
>>
>> In section 6.4 you talk about "SO" connection types; makes sense to
>> expand that into "Simultaneous Open".
>>
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Ari (as individual)
>>
>>
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