Re: [MMUSIC] 1 Week WGLC for draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-15

Thank you for the comments and updates to the draft. This concludes the 
WGLC and we will proceed with a publication request at this point.

Regards

-- Flemming (MMUSIC co-chair)

On 5/29/13 5:53 AM, Ari Keränen wrote:
> Hi Magnus,
>
> The changes look good to me.
>
>
> Thanks,
> Ari
>
> On 5/27/13 12:59 PM, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
>> Hi Ari,
>>
>> Thanks for these fixes. I have implemented them:
>>
>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-16
>>
>> Cheers
>>
>> Magnus
>>
>> On 2013-05-27 00:07, Ari Keränen wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> Here's a few editorial things worth considering fixing.
>>>
>>>
>>> 3.  Solution Overview
>>>
>>>     9.   When the client has concluded its connectivity checks, 
>>> including
>>>          promoting candidates, and has correspondingly received the
>>>
>>> s/promoting candidates/nominating candidate pairs/
>>> (using "promoting/promoted" also later in the document)
>>>
>>>
>>> 4.2.  ICE Candidate Transport Header Parameter
>>>
>>>     <component-id>: [...]
>>>     It MUST start at 1 and MUST increment by 1 for each component
>>>     of a particular candidate
>>>
>>> s/of a particular candidate/of a particular media stream/
>>>
>>>
>>> In section 6.4 you talk about "SO" connection types; makes sense to
>>> expand that into "Simultaneous Open".
>>>
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>> Ari (as individual)
>>>
>>>
>>
>>
>
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