Re: [mpls] MPLS wglc draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang

Tarek Saad <tsaad@juniper.net> Thu, 02 January 2020 18:13 UTC

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From: Tarek Saad <tsaad@juniper.net>
To: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>, Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>, "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] MPLS wglc draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang
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Hi Acee,

Thanks for the feedback. We will consider addressing those in the next revision.

Regards,
Tarek (for co-authors)

On 12/21/19, 2:14 PM, "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> wrote:

    Hi Loa, 
    
    I have rereviewed the draft and support publication. As a co-author of RFC 8349, I feel the augments are correct and straightforward. I have a couple nit-level comments.
    
       1. Since "loadshare" is not a well know compound word, I'd recommend replacing with "load-share". 
       2. Replace all instance of  "e.g. " with "e.g., ". 
    
    Thanks,
    Acee
    
    On 12/19/19, 3:22 AM, "mpls on behalf of Loa Andersson" <mpls-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of loa@pi.nu> wrote:
    
        Working Group,
        
        This is to initiate a "two week" working group last call on
        draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang.
        
        Mote: We are allowing for the holiday season and intend to close the
        wglc on Friday January 10, 2020.
        
        Please send your comments to the mpls wg mailing list (mpls@ietf.org).
        
        There are no IPR disclosures against draft-ietf-mpls-rmr.
        
        Both the authors and the contributors have stated on the working group
        mailing list that they are unaware of any non-disclosed IPRs that
        relates to this document.
        
        This working group last call ends Friday January 10, 2020.
        
        /Loa
        mpls wg co-chair
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