Re: [mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]

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Subject: Re: [mpls] Updated rev -08 posted [Re: Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)]
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>> RFC7277 is referenced in the YANG module but is absent from the I-D References
[skraza2]: Fixed. Will be part of rev -09 update.

Thanks Tom.

On 2020-03-04, 12:26 PM, "tom petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:

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    From: mpls <mpls-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Kamran Raza (skraza) <skraza=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
    Sent: 28 February 2020 04:28
    
    
    Nothing to do with Roman's comments but
    
    RFC7277 is referenced in the YANG module but is absent from the I-D References
    
    Tom Petch
    
    
    
    
    Thanks for your review Roman.
    We have posted a new rev -08 that takes care your comments and comments from other IESG reviewers.
    On behalf of authors, Please see inline [skraza]:
    
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        DISCUSS:
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        Thank you for using the YANG Security Considerations template.  Could you
        please provide more details on which nodes are sensitive to write and read
        issues; and the RPC operations of concern.  For example, see
        draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg or draft-ietf-ospf-yang.
    
    [skraza]: Done. Please see significantly enhanced section in the posted rev -08.
    
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        COMMENT:
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        A few trivial editorial nits:
    [skraza]: Have fixed all those.
    
    
        * Section 1.1. Typo.  s/minumum/minimum/
        * Section 1.1.  Typo. s/catogories/categories/
        * Section 1.1.  Typo. s/higlighting/highlighting/
        * Section 3.0.  Typo. s/grapically/graphically/
        * Section 5.2.1.  Typo. s/an network-instance/a network-instance/
    
    
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