Re: [netext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-06.txt

Hi

I’ve reviewed this document. 
The draft is well explained with a lot of examples (a bit redundant but  i am ok with the current version) . 
It is ready for publication. I don’t see any technical problems. 

In section 4.1,  you may explain the default behaviour of  Quality of Service Option (i.e. no D/M flags).
If none of flags are set, QoS resources is added. something like this.

regards,
ryuji

On Nov 14, 2013, at 4:20 AM, Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:

> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Network-Based Mobility Extensions Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 	Title           : Quality of Service Option for Proxy Mobile IPv6
> 	Author(s)       : Marco Liebsch
>                          Pierrick Seite
>                          Hidetoshi Yokota
>                          Jouni Korhonen
>                          Sri Gundavelli
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 56
> 	Date            : 2013-11-13
> 
> Abstract:
>   This specification defines a new mobility option, the Quality of
>   Service (QoS) option, for Proxy Mobile IPv6.  This option can be used
>   by the local mobility anchor and the mobile access gateway for
>   negotiating Quality of Service parameters for a mobile node's IP
>   flows.  The negotiated QoS parameters can be used for QoS policing
>   and marking of packets to enforce QoS differentiation on the path
>   between the local mobility anchor and the mobile access gateway.
>   Furthermore, making QoS parameters available on the mobile access
>   gateway enables mapping of these parameters to QoS rules that are
>   specific to the access technology and allow those rules to be
>   enforced on the access network using access technology specific
>   approaches.
> 
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