[netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (7313)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Wed, 18 January 2023 15:02 UTC

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Date: Wed, 18 Jan 2023 07:02:00 -0800
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Subject: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (7313)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8519,
"YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7313

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>

Section: A.1

Original Text
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   The following figure is the tree diagram of example-newco-acl.  In
   this example, /ietf-acl:acls/ietf-acl:acl/ietf-acl:aces/ietf-acl:ace/
   ietf-acl:matches are augmented with two new choices: protocol-
   payload-choice and metadata.  The protocol-payload-choice uses a
   grouping with an enumeration of all supported protocol values.
   Metadata matches apply to fields associated with the packet, that are
   not in the packet header, such as overall packet length.  In another
   example, /ietf-acl:acls/ietf-acl:acl/ietf-acl:aces/ietf-acl:ace/
   ietf-acl:actions are augmented with a new choice of actions.

Corrected Text
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   The following figure is the tree diagram of example-newco-acl.  In
   this example, /acl:acls/acl:acl/acl:aces/acl:ace/acl:matches
   are augmented with two new choices: protocol-payload-choice and
   metadata.  The protocol-payload-choice uses a
   grouping with an enumeration of all supported protocol values.
   Metadata matches apply to fields associated with the packet, that are
   not in the packet header, such as overall packet length.  In another
   example, /acl:acls/acl:acl/acl:aces/acl:ace/acl:actions 
   are augmented with a new choice of actions.

Notes
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The prefix is "acl" not "ietf-acl"

==
module ietf-access-control-list {
  yang-version 1.1;
  namespace "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-access-control-list";
  prefix acl;
  ...
==

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RFC8519 (draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-21)
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Title               : YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)
Publication Date    : March 2019
Author(s)           : M. Jethanandani, S. Agarwal, L. Huang, D. Blair
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Network Modeling
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

[netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (731… RFC Errata System
Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Eliot Lear
Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Mahesh Jethanandani
Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … mohamed.boucadair
Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Mahesh Jethanandani
Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Kent Watsen
Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Chris Smiley