Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-09.txt

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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-09.txt
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Re-,

> Yes, 8.4 but once this is a YANG module, then where it came from, I-D, RFC
> whatever is absent so import must have a reference.

That's fair. Will be added. Thanks.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
> Envoyé : jeudi 4 novembre 2021 13:30
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>;
> opsawg@ietf.org
> Cc : adrian@olddog.co.uk
> Objet : Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-09.txt
> 
> From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
> Sent: 04 November 2021 06:39
> 
> Hi Tom,
> 
> Thank you for the notice.
> 
> The plan is to submit a new version when the submission reopens next week.
> As you know, we are waiting for the writeup to send the document to the
> IESG.
> 
> > In addition to my previous remarks, I note that two import in 8.3 lack
> > YANG reference clauses.
> 
> I guess you meant 8.4. No reference is included for these two because they
> are defined in this same I-D.
> 
> <tp>
> 
> Yes, 8.4 but once this is a YANG module, then where it came from, I-D, RFC
> whatever is absent so import must have a reference.
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> Cheers,
> Med


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