Comments on draft-katz-yeung-traffic-08.txt

Acee Lindem <acee@REDBACK.COM> Thu, 17 October 2002 20:00 UTC

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Subject: Comments on draft-katz-yeung-traffic-08.txt
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Comments:

     - The LSA Header Diagram in section 2.3.1 does not reflect
       the fact that the instance has been extended to 24 bits.

     - Section 2.4.1 - Replace "but for obvious reasons this..."
       with "but this nomenclature is avoid here since the
       OSPF router ID is not necessarily a routable address."

     - Section 2.5.4 - Why 0.0.0.0 for the remote address for
       multiaccess links? It seems the TLV should either be
       omitted or set to the single neighbor address (since
       section 1.2 limits traffic engineering to multiaccess
       networks with 2 devices).

Suggestion:

       - Include "Implications on Graceful Restart" section
         similar to draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-gmpls-extensions-08.txt.
         Explicitly state that the goal is to maintain
         existing traffic engineered paths while discouraging
         any new ones until reservation state is obtained.

Thanks,
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Acee