Re: [pim] Last Call: <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt> (A Yang Data Model for IGMP and MLD Snooping) to Proposed Standard

tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> Wed, 10 June 2020 11:45 UTC

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Subject: Re: [pim] Last Call: <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt> (A Yang Data Model for IGMP and MLD Snooping) to Proposed Standard
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The RPC to clear the tables are somewhat insecure.  The default is to clear all so a mistake in entering a valid address will clear everything.  It would be more secure to have an explicit option for clear all.

The RPC to clear the tables has no restrictions; a NACM deny all might be appropriate

RPC or ACTION?  the latter may be suitable.

RFC5790 is referenced by the YANG module but is not in the I-D References

feature feature* is unusual; that an identifier is a feature is usually apparent from the context in which the identifier is used and so including 'feature' in the name is redundant  

And to state the obvious the formatting lacks leading spaces which will doubtless get fixed some time.

Tom Petch






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Subject: Last Call: <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt> (A Yang Data Model for IGMP and MLD Snooping) to Proposed Standard


The IESG has received a request from the Protocols for IP Multicast WG (pim)
to consider the following document: - 'A Yang Data Model for IGMP and MLD
Snooping'
  <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt> as Proposed Standard

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
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Abstract


This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure
and manage Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast
Listener Discovery (MLD) Snooping devices. The YANG module in this
document conforms to Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA).




The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang/



No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.


The document contains these normative downward references.
See RFC 3967 for additional information:
    rfc4541: Considerations for Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) Snooping Switches (Informational - IETF stream)




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