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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial suggestions on the Streams section (#2730)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Tue, 25 June 2019 22:24 UTC

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martinthomson commented on this pull request.



> @@ -187,9 +187,9 @@ QUIC:
 
 QUIC packet:
 
-: A complete processable payload with a packet type, encryption level and
-  packet number. Multiple QUIC packets can be encapsulated in a single UDP
-  datagram.
+: A complete processable unit of QUIC consisting of a header, payload, and
+  authentication tag.  Multiple QUIC packets can be encapsulated in a single

Not all packets have an authentication tag.  A single atomic unit is really the only thing we can say.

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