Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probably-editorial nits (#3805)
Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Fri, 10 July 2020 00:28 UTC
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@martinthomson commented on this pull request. > @@ -4008,8 +3992,8 @@ off-path injection as specified in {{!RFC8201}} and Section 5.2 of {{!RFC8085}}. This validation SHOULD use the quoted packet supplied in the payload of an ICMP message to associate the message with a corresponding transport connection (see Section 4.6.1 of {{!DPLPMTUD}}). ICMP message validation MUST include matching -IP addresses and UDP ports {{!RFC8085}} and, when possible, connection IDs to an -active QUIC session. The endpoint SHOULD ignore all ICMP messages that fail +IP addresses and UDP ports ({{!RFC8085}}) and, when possible, connection IDs to I think that the prevailing use of external references - those that appear in brackets - is both inline "defined in [REF]" and not as an automatic parenthetical, but an annotation of a noun in cases like "such as UDP [REF]", which you would convert to something like `<a href="REF">UDP</a>` were this text. That's harder to codify though. In many ways this is a limitation of markdown, but I don't see it as a serious shortcoming, because fixes (such as those in HTML or XML) just transfer the problem to the presentation layer. -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3805#discussion_r452560291
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- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probabl… Martin Thomson
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