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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probably-editorial nits (#3805)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Mon, 13 July 2020 03:44 UTC

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@martinthomson approved this pull request.

I'm happy with this.

>  
 Client:
 
 : The endpoint initiating a QUIC connection.
 
 Server:
 
-: The endpoint accepting incoming QUIC connections.
+: The endpoint accepting an incoming QUIC connection.

```suggestion
: The endpoint that accepts a QUIC connection.
```

> @@ -205,28 +205,28 @@ Out-of-order packet:
 
 Endpoint:
 
-: An entity that can participate in a QUIC connection by generating,
-  receiving, and processing QUIC packets. There are only two types of endpoint
-  in QUIC: client and server.
+: An entity that can participate in a QUIC connection by generating, receiving,
+  and processing QUIC packets. There are only two types of endpoint in QUIC:
+  client and server.
 
 Client:
 
 : The endpoint initiating a QUIC connection.

```suggestion
: The endpoint that initiates a QUIC connection.
```

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