Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Integrate QUIC text from DPLPMTUD (#3693)

Gorry Fairhurst <notifications@github.com> Tue, 26 May 2020 07:47 UTC

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@gorryfair commented on this pull request.



> +DPLPMTU Probe packets consists of a QUIC Header and a payload containing a
+PING Frame and multiple PADDING Frames, this can implement
+"Probing using padding data" (see section 4.1 of {{!DPLPMTUD}}. 

Looks OK, the text needs at least to 
(1) describe how to construct a probe packet
(2) explain if the probe packet can carry data or only padding.

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