Re: [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-org-02

"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Fri, 13 April 2018 13:47 UTC

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From: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>
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Subject: Re: [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-org-02
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: regext [mailto:regext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of James Galvin
> Sent: Friday, April 13, 2018 9:22 AM
> To: Registration Protocols Extensions <regext@ietf.org>
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-org-02
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> The document editors have indicated that the following document is ready
> for submission to the IESG to be considered for publication as a Proposed
> Standard:
>
> Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization Mapping
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org/
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> Please indicate your support for the publication of this document.

I support publication of this document in concept, but I just noticed some significant omissions that need to be addressed before it can move forward.

There is text missing to describe how the Role Values Registry described in Section 7.3 should be created and managed by IANA. The authors might want to look at Section 2 of RFC 8126 for a description of the kind of information that's needed.

In Section 7.1, text needs to be added to include registration of the schema from Section 5. Section 6 of RFC 5731 can be used as an example of the instructions for registering both the XML namespace and the XML schema. Note that there is no XML included with registration of the namespace.

Scott