Re: [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-org-02

"Linlin Zhou" <zhoulinlin@cnnic.cn> Mon, 16 April 2018 03:05 UTC

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From: Linlin Zhou <zhoulinlin@cnnic.cn>
To: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>, galvin <galvin@elistx.com>, regext <regext@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-org-02
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Dear Scott,
Thanks for your comments. I've already updated them in the new version and will submit it before the end of WGLC.

Regards,
Linlin


zhoulinlin@cnnic.cn
 
From: Hollenbeck, Scott
Date: 2018-04-13 22:41
To: 'galvin@elistx.com'; 'regext@ietf.org'
Subject: Re: [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-org-02
> -----Original Message-----
> From: regext [mailto:regext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Hollenbeck,
> Scott
> Sent: Friday, April 13, 2018 9:48 AM
> To: 'galvin@elistx.com' <galvin@elistx.com>; 'regext@ietf.org'
> <regext@ietf.org>
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-org-02
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: regext [mailto:regext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of James
> > Galvin
> > Sent: Friday, April 13, 2018 9:22 AM
> > To: Registration Protocols Extensions <regext@ietf.org>
> > Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-org-02
> >
> > The document editors have indicated that the following document is
> > ready for submission to the IESG to be considered for publication as a
> > Proposed
> > Standard:
> >
> > Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization Mapping
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org/
> >
> > Please indicate your support for the publication of this document.
>
> I support publication of this document in concept, but I just noticed some
> significant omissions that need to be addressed before it can move
> forward.
>
> There is text missing to describe how the Role Values Registry described
> in Section 7.3 should be created and managed by IANA. The authors might
> want to look at Section 2 of RFC 8126 for a description of the kind of
> information that's needed.
>
> In Section 7.1, text needs to be added to include registration of the
> schema from Section 5. Section 6 of RFC 5731 can be used as an example of
> the instructions for registering both the XML namespace and the XML
> schema. Note that there is no XML included with registration of the
> namespace.
 
Sorry, missed one: In Section 7.2, the IESG should be named as the registrant for a standards track extension.
 
Scott
 
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