Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections

Thanks Tony!

Have a good weekend and stay safe from covid19.

Gyan

On Fri, Mar 13, 2020 at 12:36 PM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hey Gyan, all been reviewed but yes, go for it. I asked a volunteer to
> actually fill in all the constants/configurable or not into Appendix C but
> that didn't happen during review so that would be useful. Largely cosmetic
> but helpful if one doesn't want to scour the schema for every constant
> everywhere during implementation or when building configuration part of
> RIFT ...
>
> newest xml-11 can be pulled from git to work directly on ...
>
> [prz@... /gitlab/rift_draft.bitbucket]$git remote -v
> origin git@bitbucket.org:riftrfc/rift_draft.git (fetch)
> origin git@bitbucket.org:riftrfc/rift_draft.git (push)
>
> --- tony
>
> On Thu, Mar 12, 2020 at 6:04 PM Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Tony
>>
>> I can help out do the appendixes.  Is this for the same rift rift draft.
>>
>> Gyan
>>
>> On Mon, Feb 24, 2020 at 1:20 AM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> also need readability review appendix A and C
>>>
>>> --- tony
>>>
>>> On Sun, Feb 23, 2020 at 10:00 PM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> ok, readability reviews for sections
>>>>
>>>> 4.2.5
>>>> 4.2.6
>>>> 4.2.7
>>>> 4.3
>>>> 4.4
>>>>
>>>> still outstanding for version -11
>>>>
>>>> step up please
>>>>
>>>> --- tony
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Wed, Jan 29, 2020 at 8:33 AM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Can I please have some reviewers step forward so we can cover that
>>>>> remaining sections of ongoing -10 draft for the last IESG comments (we
>>>>> basically need a 3rd party read helping with smoothing the flow of text and
>>>>> improve general public readability mainly, fine-comb normative language, no
>>>>> hairy technical issues discussions or anything like this necessary)
>>>>>
>>>>> we have everything reviewed until 4.2..4
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> we need reviews for 4.2.5 until 8
>>>>>
>>>>> good resolution in terms of size and stuff that belongs together would
>>>>> be
>>>>>
>>>>> 4.2.5
>>>>> 4.2.6
>>>>> 4.2.7
>>>>> 4.3
>>>>> 4.4
>>>>> 5.
>>>>> 6.
>>>>> 7.
>>>>>
>>>>> volunteers much appreciated
>>>>>
>>>>> --- tony
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
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>> --
>>
>> Gyan  Mishra
>>
>> Network Engineering & Technology
>>
>> Verizon
>>
>> Silver Spring, MD 20904
>>
>> Phone: 301 502-1347
>>
>> Email: gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com
>>
>>
>>
>> --

Gyan  Mishra

Network Engineering & Technology

Verizon

Silver Spring, MD 20904

Phone: 301 502-1347

Email: gyan.s.mishra@verizon.com