Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections
Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> Mon, 24 February 2020 06:20 UTC
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From: Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 23 Feb 2020 22:19:37 -0800
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Subject: Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections
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also need readability review appendix A and C --- tony On Sun, Feb 23, 2020 at 10:00 PM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> wrote: > ok, readability reviews for sections > > 4.2.5 > 4.2.6 > 4.2.7 > 4.3 > 4.4 > > still outstanding for version -11 > > step up please > > --- tony > > > On Wed, Jan 29, 2020 at 8:33 AM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> > wrote: > >> Can I please have some reviewers step forward so we can cover that >> remaining sections of ongoing -10 draft for the last IESG comments (we >> basically need a 3rd party read helping with smoothing the flow of text and >> improve general public readability mainly, fine-comb normative language, no >> hairy technical issues discussions or anything like this necessary) >> >> we have everything reviewed until 4.2.4 >> >> we need reviews for 4.2.5 until 8 >> >> good resolution in terms of size and stuff that belongs together would be >> >> 4.2.5 >> 4.2.6 >> 4.2.7 >> 4.3 >> 4.4 >> 5. >> 6. >> 7. >> >> volunteers much appreciated >> >> --- tony >> >> >> >>
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- Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readabilit… Gyan Mishra
- Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readabilit… Tony Przygienda