Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections
Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> Mon, 24 February 2020 06:01 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections
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ok, readability reviews for sections 4.2.5 4.2.6 4.2.7 4.3 4.4 still outstanding for version -11 step up please --- tony On Wed, Jan 29, 2020 at 8:33 AM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> wrote: > Can I please have some reviewers step forward so we can cover that > remaining sections of ongoing -10 draft for the last IESG comments (we > basically need a 3rd party read helping with smoothing the flow of text and > improve general public readability mainly, fine-comb normative language, no > hairy technical issues discussions or anything like this necessary) > > we have everything reviewed until 4.2.4 > > we need reviews for 4.2.5 until 8 > > good resolution in terms of size and stuff that belongs together would be > > 4.2.5 > 4.2.6 > 4.2.7 > 4.3 > 4.4 > 5. > 6. > 7. > > volunteers much appreciated > > --- tony > > > >
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- Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readabilit… Gyan Mishra
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