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Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections

Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com> Fri, 13 March 2020 01:04 UTC

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From: Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 12 Mar 2020 21:04:26 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections
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Hi Tony

I can help out do the appendixes.  Is this for the same rift rift draft.

Gyan

On Mon, Feb 24, 2020 at 1:20 AM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> also need readability review appendix A and C
>
> --- tony
>
> On Sun, Feb 23, 2020 at 10:00 PM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> ok, readability reviews for sections
>>
>> 4.2.5
>> 4.2.6
>> 4.2.7
>> 4.3
>> 4.4
>>
>> still outstanding for version -11
>>
>> step up please
>>
>> --- tony
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Jan 29, 2020 at 8:33 AM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Can I please have some reviewers step forward so we can cover that
>>> remaining sections of ongoing -10 draft for the last IESG comments (we
>>> basically need a 3rd party read helping with smoothing the flow of text and
>>> improve general public readability mainly, fine-comb normative language, no
>>> hairy technical issues discussions or anything like this necessary)
>>>
>>> we have everything reviewed until 4.2..4
>>>
>>
>>> we need reviews for 4.2.5 until 8
>>>
>>> good resolution in terms of size and stuff that belongs together would
>>> be
>>>
>>> 4.2.5
>>> 4.2.6
>>> 4.2.7
>>> 4.3
>>> 4.4
>>> 5.
>>> 6.
>>> 7.
>>>
>>> volunteers much appreciated
>>>
>>> --- tony
>>>
>>>
>>>
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